Those flowers, so fresh!

Jun 29 2008  | Views 839 |  Comments  (56)
As I lie pale and white Those flowers on my chest so fresh Mourners in black and white Shedd... Expand

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  poetBittersweet posted 1 month ago

How would you know unless you try?



  elementa posted 1 month ago

nay!!  glad u came up with the idea...but m gonna pass...i aint good enough



  poetBittersweet posted 1 month ago

Thanks, Elementa! You could always record it and post it here too!



  elementa posted 1 month ago

dude...if we ever meet...i am sooo gonna rap 'em out!! just love these lines that u write...!!
awesome!!



  poetBittersweet posted 1 month ago

Truth sometimes has that effect, lone_crusader!



  lone_crusader posted 1 month ago

          made me sad.



  poetBittersweet posted 1 month ago

I am so glad you found it interesting, Lata! Thanks!



  poetBittersweet posted 1 month ago

Thanks, Bhavna!



  Latav posted 2 mnths ago

One of the bitter truths of life..." ..shedding right tears, in right measure.." 
Your poem brings out this truth in a nice way...liked the fresh flowers too.



  bhavna14 posted 2 mnths ago

guddd one,,, pBs... i likeddd d poem n for sum reason,,, i realllyyy likeddd d title as well... dunnooo y but jst smthn about it... gr8888 pick....  

cheeriozzz
Bhavna





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