Silent but yet loud...

Wonderful...:-)

Vinod

The rhythmic perfection surpasses the sensitive content of the poem. Try the beat on a noval idea!

Regards

Satish

Thanks, Ehsaas!

Just a dediction! Bina. Take a look at his blog. You'll see what inspired this!

Dimwit, you challenged me! Ok. not exactly cheallenged! Go back to your blog and read the first few lines!Those words set me thinking! And here's what emerged. And it's the first time I've written a poem for a *guy* and not taken a treat.

The last time I wrote one for a guy (a Kenyan trying to woo a Mallu), the payment was Pepsi and samosas from the college canteen. The results were hilarious!

PBS
great description of feelings 

PBS
r u describing dimmy or it is just dedication?
nice one!

PBS you freak!

This is the first time that some *guy* has written me a poem!!  Hopefully it is the last time.  grrrr

ok just kidding... :))

That was a really good poem.  It described the whole pressure cooker scenario of unexplored feelings causing havoc and confusion in a system :)

Enjoyed it!  Thanks :))
Cheers
Dimwit

Check out Dimwit's blog! seeingeye

And thanks a lot for the wonderful comment!

why the dedication????
what's up with dimwit???
loud sounds! 
hear the feelings crystal clear! 
lovely!