Muffled sobs
Gasping to be let out
Strangling you
Lea...
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Muffled sobs
Gasping to be let out
Strangling you
Leaving you breathless
Silently
Clenching of jaws
Every tendon taut
A throb in temple
Blazing heat waves
Striking your face
A racing heart
Pounding loud
Warmth creeping up
From below ears
Eyes sparkling with love
(Dedicated to dimwit)
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The opening lines in his blog triggered off this one! Maya
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Wonderful Dedication to Dimwit.
MayaAnil
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PBS,
wonderful love poem........... with less than 50 words you gave us the best poem.......
Great work with words.......
Prasad
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Nice, very nice. Short, sweet and very to the point.
Viv
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Simple
Lakshmi!
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pBs
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Explosive, and with such few words..........how the h**l do you do it.......
lakshmi
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Thanks, Satishetta
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