Porter Aali (Short Story)

Apr 21 2008  | Views 1244 |  Comments  (52)
Ali was short. It was in his genes. His father (Uppa) and grandfather(Uppooppa) weren’t... Expand

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  poetBittersweet posted 3 mnths ago

Thanks, Uma



  s uma posted 3 mnths ago

A nice tribute to a wonderful porter - very vivid description!  Uma



  poetBittersweet posted 4 mnths ago

You are absolutely right, Lakshmi! It's sad when you think about them!



  poetBittersweet posted 4 mnths ago

Thanks, Girdhar!



  poetBittersweet posted 4 mnths ago

There are so many Aali's around today, Kamalji. Society has no use of them after their prime. A disturbing thought, actually. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment!



  LakshmiMukundan posted 4 mnths ago

pBs

 Many labourers who have nothing but muscle power to earn their living end up like this...when they get old and "useless", if they still survive they are often thrown out by younger family members (an NGO pal tells me) who can barely feed themselves.Then they have to beg and sleep on the streets........there is no social security of any sort for them (or us) to fall back on........very moving write in your usual no-frills, deeply emotional style.

lakshmi



  poetBittersweet posted 4 mnths ago

Thanks, istroller! That was sweet of you!



  Girdhar Gopal posted 4 mnths ago

PBS: Life is tough for all of us, made tougher sometimes by people around us. There is simple poetic quality to your writing.
Rgds, Girdhar



  kamalji posted 4 mnths ago

Dear Poet,

Simply superb.You can feel sorrry for Aali.And yes he was finally rested.

This reminds me of something recently.My walker friend Chandru, day befoer told me,hes 60 now and took VRS froma Bank, that he feels idle,and he has applied for a job.They need retired bank employees for a pittiance .So he has gone to Jodhpur for training, and will take up the city job here 10 to 6 for 20,000/- pm/so he wont get his rest.He has enough money, but well the wife may be telling hjim go work instead of lousing around at home so we can have a AC instead of a Cooler, u never know.

And here i am not even feeling guilty of having retired at 55, and just loving every mintue of solitude.

Regards.kamal



  istroller posted 4 mnths ago

liked ur story..it warmed my heart's cockles 





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